What do you think of this?It's rough and was done in kind of a rush, but can you just tell me what you think?

Very well done, except I'm confused in the timeline. Is it suppose to be an old time line 1400-1800? Or a modern one 2011? Futher more the books is rather interesting and has great pace and language. Though in your action book(if it is one) don't forget your characters need to rest, if its a romance then let them take time off the romance. Remember people like to know the character so they know how they feel. I suggest you prusue in the book and get it published by all means I will try and buy it. It would he great if you could tell us what date it's based on because I know for one that people in 2011 don't really wear night gowns anymore and if they do run on the street they will be run over by a car.